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MoTy's avatar

You have to laugh, or you’ll cry. A drunken climb - euphoric at the start, ending simply not the way you wanted it to. All that, just to be crowned with antlers and a few blisters. Smashing, Charlie.

Charlie Boy's avatar

Just another Friday, ay. Thanks dude, as always

Grey Selkie’s Deep Dive's avatar

Very interesting poem, and image.

There is a futility in seeking meaning, success, and security if one is missing the bigger picture….

Perhaps all such attempts are doomed to fail.

Gravity - is a law of nature.

Grey

Charlie Boy's avatar

Thanks Grey, appreciate the meaningful comment. Nail on the head.

Grey Selkie’s Deep Dive's avatar

I’d refine my comment slightly - I am not meaning one should be pessimistic.

It is those who are misaligned in what they seek who are doomed to failure…

They climb to their objective, but find it lacks foundation.

It is empty of meaning.

If you seek your bearing, and climb towards the correct ultimate summit, in alignment with being itself, then wider perspectives will guide your way.

Nice poem

👍

troy adkins's avatar

this is gd excellent.

where have you been?

Charlie Boy's avatar

Mostly in the bushes

Raven's avatar

Ill never believe.

Charlie Boy's avatar

At least it’s a pretty view

lydia grace's avatar

drooling together

Brandi Lynn's avatar

That ending hits hard. Getting to the top only to realize the climb ruined everything you were trying to reach for is such a lonely, heavy feeling ✨

Charlie Boy's avatar

It’s a theme I absolutely love to explore. The complete obliteration of desire.